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Give me your honest opinion...


I remember the first time we touched
My hand gently slid into yours
I remember the first time we kissed
Our lips softly, gently brushing together

I remember the first time I felt the beat of your heart
My hand lay lovingly on your strong chest
I remember the first time we made love
The strength of you between my soft thighs

I remember the first time you said, "I love you"
My soul feeling complete as I whispered it back
I remember when I silently pledged myself to you
I gave you my heart.


What do you think? I am going to give it to my boyfriend, so I want opinions!


Sep. 13th, 2002 05:57 pm (UTC)
i disagree, i like the soft thighs bit.

not sure about the "heart swelled with emotion" bit, that'd tell him that you're all his no matter what.

i like girls who don't do so. that's to remind me that i have to make a lot of effort to keep them. i suppose that make a relationship more fun, exciting and sexy.

or perhaps that's just me, as i don't fancy a new relationship with someone who sort of 'stalk' me around. not that i like flirting (i never do, and i take a relaltionship very seriously), just like to keep guessing :)

sorry if i don't make any sense. nevertheless, the poem's good.

ps - this is my first lj post, so .. :/
Sep. 13th, 2002 06:01 pm (UTC)
lol...we are engaged
Sep. 13th, 2002 06:34 pm (UTC)
I'm confused.. what was the "got my necklace and phone back" or whatever post all about?
Sep. 13th, 2002 06:35 pm (UTC)
It is sort of a weird story. We were having a lot of problems. I got mad so I gave him back the necklace, which I just got back not too long ago. Things are okay now, they were just really rough the past 2.5 months

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