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Give me your honest opinion...


I remember the first time we touched
My hand gently slid into yours
I remember the first time we kissed
Our lips softly, gently brushing together

I remember the first time I felt the beat of your heart
My hand lay lovingly on your strong chest
I remember the first time we made love
The strength of you between my soft thighs

I remember the first time you said, "I love you"
My soul feeling complete as I whispered it back
I remember when I silently pledged myself to you
I gave you my heart.


What do you think? I am going to give it to my boyfriend, so I want opinions!


Sep. 13th, 2002 06:31 pm (UTC)
Soft thighs? Better hit the treadmill....
Sep. 13th, 2002 06:37 pm (UTC)
lol...hey now...I work out everyday...not too fond of the treadmill, but love eliptic machine and aerobics! :)

Is that your opinion? Should I say hard thighs? Like I was telling cozmo it was meant as a comparison between his "manliness" and my "femininity"
Sep. 13th, 2002 08:34 pm (UTC)
Maybe she means soft as in "smooth skin," not "mushy, blobby fat"...
Sep. 13th, 2002 09:32 pm (UTC)
Re: Hmmm...
lol...that is what I meant
Sep. 14th, 2002 10:53 am (UTC)
Re: Hmmm...

Hmmm, I think if she meant mushy blobby fat, she would have put it in, I agree! *lmfao* Has a nice ring to it though...

Still, I dont know if that bit reaaaly fits in!

Perhaps something about his big deliciously broad shoulders wrapped around you, and like holding you! Mmm... broad shoulders... *salivate*
Sep. 16th, 2002 10:40 am (UTC)
Re: Hmmm...