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Give me your honest opinion...

Remember…

I remember the first time we touched
My hand gently slid into yours
I remember the first time we kissed
Our lips softly, gently brushing together

I remember the first time I felt the beat of your heart
My hand lay lovingly on your strong chest
I remember the first time we made love
The strength of you between my soft thighs

I remember the first time you said, "I love you"
My soul feeling complete as I whispered it back
I remember when I silently pledged myself to you
I gave you my heart.

~~~~~

What do you think? I am going to give it to my boyfriend, so I want opinions!

Comments

chrisf_uk
Sep. 16th, 2002 03:57 pm (UTC)
Oh i dunno much about poetry, but i know what i like...... and i wish i had someone who would write stuff like that for me so if he thinks like me then yep its a winner.... :-) ;-)
natalie516
Sep. 16th, 2002 05:08 pm (UTC)
Re:
Thanks Chris!

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